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Post by Raito on Tue Aug 11, 2009 10:17 am

ehm....well as the title say ! i write....ehm ...poems! and well i don't find them pretty good but i still write them anyway Razz (it's a hobby) okay well because i wasn't into writin and stuff as much as now i forgot to write them on paper or save them so i don't have many to put here! but do not be afraid it's summer and i have extra load of time ! anyway enough talking !

Even If


even if the rain kept me away ...
i will kneel and pray ....

GOD.......wash the rain far away ...

even if i become deff and can't hear ........
i will look at her and say :

GOD...... thank you for this music in my ear...

even if i become blind and can't see
i will look at the sky and say :

GOD...... i don't care if i can't see just leave her here with me

even if my time come's to fade away ......
with my last breath i would say :

GOD ...... why heaven if i can't stay?


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Re: Raito's not so creative world

Post by KhaLed on Wed Aug 12, 2009 8:24 pm

congrats about creating a thread here at creators corner Very Happy

well it is well organized but it looks short ... is it complete or the is other parts you'll put later on ?

well there are a lot of mistakes but if you keep writing you'll improve your skills for sure Very Happy

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Re: Raito's not so creative world

Post by Firestorm on Wed Oct 28, 2009 7:43 pm

Nice work on the poem. Even though I'm not too keen with poem, I think it's quite okay

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