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Post by Safersin on Tue Aug 04, 2009 10:36 am

As the name suggests, I shall post my works here. However only poetry and short stories will be posted here. I've lngercstories but those will be in other threads.

Anyhow, I'll just compose something on the spot so you people know my style.

The smell of Dusk

The wavering orb cowering
itself below the land of
the distance, shines.
The dying light illuminated
this worl of violet and blue
predicting the coming of darkness.
The air crackled and stank
of this colour.
The taste of despair lingers
still. Even after love filled
our empty hearts.
The smell faintly reminded
those uncontrolable memories
to surface and...
watch the sunset with us.
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Post by candyman on Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:41 pm

great atmosphere u described there but there are some mistakes
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Re: My Writing

Post by Safersin on Wed Aug 05, 2009 11:46 pm

I'll strt with a small haiku in English. Ryojin

Spoiler:

Besides the flowing stream
Between the two smooth hills
Cherry blosoms fall

then I'll post this poem: Moon

Millions dance as the glance
at the smiling globe.
Millions sing as they bring
together a future.
The empty land
filled with imagination and hope
reached out to us
from the heaven above.
Waltzing in the melody of night
it painted the world silver.
But it is empty...
Reflecting my heart
as it reflects the
glories of the sun.
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Re: My Writing

Post by Fatallystab111 on Thu Aug 06, 2009 7:27 am

Cool!..I never knew you write poetry Safer-sa,but your poetry is very cool...Keep it up...i love The * Moon* Poem....Waiting for more Smile
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Re: My Writing

Post by Safersin on Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:12 am

One of the recent works by me that seems to have some kind of standard. Ryojin

Tears in a Kiss

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Softly, carefully, I kissed time
as it swept away the past.
The tenderness left me fearful
that this passion is the last.
Loneliness scorned at my solitude.
I tasted tears running down your face
as we kissed ever so awkwardly,
slowly, without reason or pace.
I stood behind you waiting for
this world to understand love.
Praying for time to forgive me,
and the blessings of above.
I held your hand as I felt your tears,
as I held onto our fate.
But the tears would not stop,
nor would time halt to wait.
I kissed you thoughtlessly
and... cried...

A rainbow appeared,
after our tears dried...


and if you're on aE. I've several other alright poems there. Ryojin
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Re: My Writing

Post by KhaLed on Wed Aug 12, 2009 8:37 pm

Softly, carefully, I kissed time
as it swept away the past.
The tenderness left me fearful
that this passion is the last.
Loneliness scorned at my solitude.
I tasted tears running down your face
as we kissed ever so awkwardly,
slowly, without reason or pace.
I stood behind you waiting for
this world to understand love.
Praying for time to forgive me,
and the blessings of above.
I held your hand as I felt your tears,
as I held onto our fate.
But the tears would not stop,
nor would time halt to wait.
I kissed you thoughtlessly
and... cried...

A rainbow appeared,
after our tears dried...
I liked this one ... the first one was kinda uncoordinated
I liked this one too
Millions dance as the glance
at the smiling globe.
Millions sing as they bring
together a future.
The empty land
filled with imagination and hope
reached out to us
from the heaven above.
Waltzing in the melody of night
it painted the world silver.
But it is empty...
Reflecting my heart
as it reflects the
glories of the sun.
the last two ones are really cool Cool

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